作文小练习：针对现在的雾霾天气，写一篇短文说明如何解决这一问题。
In recent years , Our economic made significant development. However , according to a recent survey ,the pollution has become a big challenge to all of us .The most direct feeling is that Haze is becoming more and more serious recently.
- 近年来,我们经济取得了重大发展。然而,根据最近的一项调查,污染已经成为我们的一个巨大的挑战。最直接的感受是阴霾最近变得越来越严重。
【分析1】写作中尽量少用初高中词汇，多用四六级词汇。比如本例中用significant不用important.#英语四六级#
- 常用的替换词：
- important=essential, be of importance, significant, crucial, vital
- a lot, a lot of=a great deal of, a great many, many a, quite a few
- difficult=challenging, rough
- think, believe=consider, assume that, maintain, argue that
- get=gain, acquire, obtain, achieve, attain
To settle this problem, a series of measures should be taken as follows. First ,we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate pollutants .Second, we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people 's daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze. Third, we should develop green and energy-saving energy to lower the emission of haze and improve air quality.
- 首先,我们应该加强空气监测微小颗粒污染物的水平较低。其次,我们应该制定更加严格的法律法规,不断完善我们目前的环境保护法律规范人们的日常行为和工业生产和惩罚那些忽视保护和工厂继续排放危险材料,导致阴霾。第三,我们应该发展绿色和节能能源降低烟雾的排放,提高空气质量。
【分析2】在不出现错误的情况下，尽可能少用简单句，多用复合句及被动语态。
- To settle this problem，a series of measures should be taken as follows.为了解决这个问题,应采取一系列措施如下。不定式短语做目的状语，主句采用被动语态，使句式更生动多变。
【分析3】为了层次分明，可以采用以下词或短语#英语每日一句#
- First ,Second,Third,……
- Firstly,/ To start with,/ To begin with
- Secondly,/ Next,/ In addition,/ Moreover
- Furthermore,Lastly,/ Last but not least
As far as I am concerned , if we work together to be able to do such measures ,our environment will getting better and better and haze weather will vanish completely.
- 就我而言,如果我们一起努力做这样的措施,我们的环境将变得越来越好,阴霾的天气将完全消失。
【分析4】尽可能多地使用词组，e.g.
- As far as I am concerned 就我而言
